The Trail of Tears has always
been a reoccurring topic discussed in history classes I have taken. Just as we’re
(students) are taught, they were forced off their land and were considered, “backward
and ignorant”, therefore had to learn the Christian way of living. However, many
of the individuals interviewed in the film we saw in class, stated that we need
to learn about the history of the Cherokee population because a lot of facts
are left unsaid and I feel that’s what I really gained insight to. I always
thought they were forced to do what they were told by the whites such as changing
their lifestyle and learning the European culture. But, I learned they actually
wanted to adapt to white customs in order to keep their homeland. And, most of
all they were successful in doing so. Doing everything the right way, regarding
changing their ways and participating in the missionary schools, chaos still
broke out when two leaders, Elias Boudinot and John Ridges wanted to marry
white women. Now, the issues among the Cherokee people were about “color”. They
proved they are capable of the same things white can do, yet this served as a
new excuse for them to suffer from oppression.
It just doesn’t seem to make
sense that a group of people were treated less than humans by the same people
who welcomed them with open arms at one point. Looking at the big picture, the
real reason of it was purely greed. Wealth was the motive, which is what
President Jackson wanted and of course he had the support in the Cherokee
genocide and obviously the power to do so. It was survival of the fittest, a
concept in Social Darwinism. In the case of the Cherokee population, money was
something to fight for, not for them, but for the whites which is why the
Cherokees couldn’t testify against whites, sell land, mine for gold or have
freedom of speech. Even the sympathizers and intellectuals had to be
eliminated.
Everything has to be done to make
sure wealth was in the hands of the whites and only them. As we discussed,
global genocide is evident throughout history as a repeating event. And
unfortunately, we’re not safe today either. Greed drives people to do bizarre
things, whether it’s on a big or small scale. A lot of times, wants are placed
on top of needs. It makes me think of a
small example like the MTA and their greed when it comes to raising up the
fares, with the poor economy and middle class struggling enough already. But,
of course, there are always excuses as to why their actions are justified.
I am here writing a review towards your piece Ms. Soto, so please don’t mind my criticism. As far as defining your blog’s topic from your piece of reading, you did well. According to the beginning of your blog you’re familiar with the writing as well as related topics. However, you just need a bit more revision as to how your sentence structure came out as in missing words, misplaced periods and comma’s, etc. For example or better yet the first point out, in your first paragraph you wrote this after period when it should’ve been a comma, “And, most of all they were successful in doing so.” This is as far as my criticism goes. You just need to revise and conjunct your sentences more efficiently. Your information seems to be on point however. A few key terms or key line that you used in relation in your blog that I favored was the whole “concept of social Darwinism” line. Nice choice in comparing with your writing, as well as writing in relation to real life with the MTA dilemma and about global matters like “genocide”. One line that did catch me but I felt out in the open and a bit confused was the, “Even the sympathizers and intellectuals had to be eliminated”, line which however was interesting but I felt like it was a lot to think about with not enough supporting info. However on a brighter side it was a very interesting piece and I mean that with all honesty. Nevertheless, it’s exactly what a blog is supposed to be, straight from the self.
ReplyDeleteI have taken your advice and suggestions in consideration and have tried to develop a revised piece on my blog. Thank you a lot, it was helpful. I definitely saw areas that I had to improve on.
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